My Little Friend
[written and composed by HarryBudini]
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My Little Friend
When I get home today
I know I'm gonna play with my little friend Sleeps inside the wall comes by when I call he's my little friend I'd be all alone if he wasn't home on my own Then I got home one day and they had taken away my little friend So I hoped and prayed that nothing really preyed upon my little friend Now that he's lost his home he's all alone on his own So to find out where he was I left a trail of crumbs and cheese Waiting outside my home hopeful hands ready to seize Run into my hand my hand will understand my little friend Curl in your new nest I want only the best for my little friend if he wasn't home I'd be all alone on my own They can call me Willard anyway we'll make them see that in all the world there are no better friends than you and me |
REVIEWS
reviewer: Jeff Roberts
Positive Comments More Beatlesque music from Harry!! This has a great vibe and an introverted Sgt Pepper story. Really tight and clever arranging here with some stellar bass work and good drums (are you playing drums or using samples?). Super nice guitar solo! Constructive CommentsThe piano may be too "plinky" childlike. I think, as in last review, that you really just need to accept your voice and have on vocal track in the verses. It's cluttered with multiple voices, especially when the phrasing isn't exactly the same in each of them. I'd like to hear this done to potential --do you have someone in your town who could sing, especially a female voice? 39/45 reviewer: Junior Murrell
Positive Comments Has a childrens TV feel about it. hear a little Beetles vibe in there. Instrumentation is interesting and shows a lot of creativity. can see alot of thought went in to the peice. Constructive Comments Performance needs to be refined a bit. Somtimes the timing goes; you want to check that. Perhaps lay your tracks down against a metronome. The production also can be a little bigger to deliver all the drama created by the interesting bits which come in and out. 34/45 reviewer: Monk Abrahms
Positive Comments OF COURSE BEATLES INFLUENCE-its a strange mcartney voice -with the flu-not such a bad thing Constructive Comments no hook-not that i believe in them-but nothing stood too much 28/50 |